> Do you agree that hand written letters are considered more meaningful these days compared to a tex

2023-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I couldn\'t agree more. We can literally do everything with smartphones, even meals, grocery shopping, clothe shopping, etc at any time. Writing a letter takes a lot of effort, First of all, I have to buy a paper that I can hardly buy through the online shop. This is because online shops usually sell in large batches. I might be afraid to spend more money than I expected to. So I have to get out of the house to buy letters and come back. Finally, I have to get out of the house to go to the post office after finish writing. The post office runs from 9 o\'clock to 6 o\'clock. I should go there during business hours. Hand-writing is also a big burden to me. My handwriting is a mess because I don\'t use my handwriting these days. How can not I admit written letter are more meaningful?

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Thank you for this Ms. [Name]. Some people just don\'t appreciate the sentimental value in hand written letters. Some might even see it as a cheap gift. I agree with you though, there is so much effort given in writing a letter.

I couldn\'t agree more.
>>> correct
We can literally do everything with smartphones, even meals, grocery shopping, clothe shopping, etc at any time.

>>> We can literally do everything with smartphones, even order meals, grocery shopping, clothes shopping, etc. at any time.

Writing a letter takes a lot of effort,

>>> correct

First of all, I have to buy a paper that I can hardly buy through the online shop.

>>> correct

>>> OR: First of all, I have to buy a piece of paper that I hardly can buy through the online shop.

This is because online shops usually sell in large batches.

>>> correct

>>> OR: This is because online shops usually sell in bulks. [ \"in bulk\" = (especially of goods) in large quantities, usually at a reduced price]

I might be afraid to spend more money than I expected to.

>>> correct

>>> OR: I might not be willing to spend more money than I want to.

So I have to get out of the house to buy letters and come back.

>>> OR: So I have to get out of the house to buy at the stationary store and come back.

Finally, I have to get out of the house to go to the post office after finish writing.

>>> Finally, I have to get out of the house to go to the post office after I finished writing it.

The post office runs from 9 o\'clock to 6 o\'clock.

>>> correct

I should go there during business hours.

>>> correct

Hand-writing is also a big burden to me.

>>> correct

My handwriting is a mess because I don\'t use my handwriting these days.
>>> OR: My handwriting is a mess because I don\'t get to practice it these days.

How can not I admit written letter are more meaningful?

>>> How can I not admit that written letters are more meaningful?

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