Do you agree that ‘home is where the heart is’?
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Hi Su,
Thank you for completing your homework. Let me further explain the essay question. Imagine you have a special place where you feel very happy and comfortable. This place could be your house, where you live with your family. Now, some people believe that this special place, where you feel happy and loved, is your true home. They say, \"Home is where the heart is.\" It means that the place where you feel the most loved and safe is like your home, no matter if it\'s an actual house or not. For example, think about when you go to your grandma\'s house. You might feel really happy there because your grandma loves you a lot and takes care of you. Even though it\'s not your own house, you might feel like it\'s your home because you\'re surrounded by love. So, the saying \"Home is where the heart is\" means that the place where you feel the most love and happiness is like your home, even if it\'s not your actual house.
~Teacher Cathy
Maybe the question means when you’re ok and all that heart is good and fine.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Maybe the question means that when you feel okay and your heart is in a good and content state.
where you are and what you do.
>>It depends on where you are and what you do.
I don’t agree.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I don’t totally agree.
Because I’m really important about own my space and home.
>>Because having my own space and comfortable home is truly important to me.
Maybe when l don’t have a physical house, i’m uncomfortable and depression.
>>Maybe when I don\'t have a house, I feel uncomfortable and depressed.
So i should exist my comfortable home.
>>So, for me, my home is where my heart is.
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