Do you agree that humans are ruled by their emotions? Why or why not?
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I partially agree that humans are ruled by emotion. What rules humans depends on individual person. It is case by case. Some people are ruled by emotion and the others are ruled by rationality. In my case, I was ruled by emotion, when I was young. As I am getting age, I become rational and wise and I can judge with cool head.
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Thank you Ms. [Name]!
Oh, I love the transition you had. It\'s maturity. :)
~Lucy
I partially agree that humans are ruled by emotion.
>>CORRECT!
What rules humans depends on individual person.
>>CORRECT!
It is case by case.
>>CORRECT!
Some people are ruled by emotion and the others are ruled by rationality.
>>CORRECT!
In my case, I was ruled by emotion, when I was young.
>>CORRECT!
As I am getting age, I become rational and wise and I can judge with cool head.
>>CORRECT!
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