Do you agree that it\'s bravery to stop when you know that you\'ve done enough for something? Explai
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I think it is bravery.
Sometimes it\'s hard to get rid of things you have been doing for many years, like routine.
It\'s really brave to control yourself and also hard.
And also things like drugs or smokes are hard to stop after u started... :(
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Do you agree that it\'s bravery to stop when you know that you\'ve done enough for something? Explain.
I think it is bravery.
>>> CORRECT
Sometimes it\'s hard to get rid of things you have been doing for many years, like routine.
>>> Sometimes it\'s really hard to get rid of the things you have been doing for many years; like your routine.
It\'s really brave to control yourself and also hard.
>>> It\'s really bravery to control yourself and it\'s hard at the same time.
And also things like drugs or smokes are hard to stop after u started.
>>> Moreover, drugs and smoking are really difficult to stop when you already started it. Same with giving up on something you know will never happen.
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