Do you agree that men should also do the laundry at home?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can\'t agree more.
Men have to do housework.
Housework has special things.
That doing housework are not striking but do not housework that are striking.
So we have to do housework.
But housework is too many and difficult.
People eat everyday, and change the clothes, and make dirty for living space.
We have to share this.
Mom or wife do all this things, they will be exhausted.
In conclusion, what we are family we take the housework together.
Not important doing who women or men.
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I can\'t agree more.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I completely agree.
Men have to do housework.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Men have to do some housework.
Housework has special things.
>>Doing housework has special things.
OR>>Doing housework can give a lot of things.
That doing housework are not striking but do not housework that are striking.
>>Doing housework is not striking but not doing housework is also not striking.
So we have to do housework.
>>CORRECT
But housework is too many and difficult.
>>But doing a lot of housework is difficult.
People eat everyday, and change the clothes, and make dirty for living space.
>>People often eat everyday, change their clothes and also make the house dirty.
We have to share this.
>>CORRECT
OR>>We have to share in doing housework.
Mom or wife do all this things, they will be exhausted.
>>If the mom or the wife does all this things, they will be exhausted.
In conclusion, what we are family we take the housework together.
>>In conclusion, if we are a family, we should do the housework together.
OR>>To conclude my point, all should do the housework together in a family.
Not important doing who women or men.
>>It\'s not important who does the housework, may it be men or women.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I completely agree.
Men have to do housework.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Men have to do some housework.
Housework has special things.
>>Doing housework has special things.
OR>>Doing housework can give a lot of things.
That doing housework are not striking but do not housework that are striking.
>>Doing housework is not striking but not doing housework is also not striking.
So we have to do housework.
>>CORRECT
But housework is too many and difficult.
>>But doing a lot of housework is difficult.
People eat everyday, and change the clothes, and make dirty for living space.
>>People often eat everyday, change their clothes and also make the house dirty.
We have to share this.
>>CORRECT
OR>>We have to share in doing housework.
Mom or wife do all this things, they will be exhausted.
>>If the mom or the wife does all this things, they will be exhausted.
In conclusion, what we are family we take the housework together.
>>In conclusion, if we are a family, we should do the housework together.
OR>>To conclude my point, all should do the housework together in a family.
Not important doing who women or men.
>>It\'s not important who does the housework, may it be men or women.
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