Do you agree that men should also do the laundry at home?

2019-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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Nowadays, Men must do the housework, do the laundry and wash dish, etc. Because most of women have a job. They don\'t have enough time to do the housework. Men and women have to help each other.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Indeed you are right. It doesn\'t matter now if you are a woman or a man. Everybody is given responsibility when it comes to household chores. ^-^

Thank you for expanding and explaining your answer.

Until the next one! :)

~Teacher Sheila

Nowadays, Men must do the housework, do the laundry and wash dish, etc.
>>Nowadays, men must do the housework like doing the laundry and washing the dishes, etc.

Because most of women have a job. 
>>Because most of the women have a job.
OR>>Because most women have jobs.

They don\'t have enough time to do the housework.
>>CORRECT

Men and women have to help each other.
>>CORRECT

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