Do you agree that men should also do the laundry at home?

2019-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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Dear teacher Sheila Hello there! Happy hump day! teacher, this is my company on-line site address. https://www.trigo-group.com/en I work in the office of a Korean corporation. Today i\'m mispronounce word. Grammar errors/mistakes: 7. If fail on the business, the cost of failure is high. My sentence is \'If fail in own\'s business\'. This mistake of cause is my small voice. So i will raise my voice for ours lesson. Today\'s recommended song is \"Can\'t take my eyes off you\". Singer is Morten harket. Do you know this song? Homework : Do you agree that men should also do the laundry at home? I agree. It\'s very easy, not difficult. How to work a washing machine is easy too. Just push the button.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tony! Thank you for sending some information about your company. I appreciate it.

I know the song because I like the message.

I will try to recommend a good song that I know tomorrow. :)

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow! ^_^

~Teacher Sheila :)

I work in the office of a Korean corporation.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I am an officer worker in a Korean corporation.

Today i\'m mispronounce word.
>>Today, I mispronounced words.

My sentence is \'If fail in own\'s business\'.
>>CORRECT

OR>>My sentence was \"If fail in own\'s business.\"

This mistake of cause is my small voice.

>>This mistake is caused by my soft voice.

So i will raise my voice for ours lesson.
>>So, I will try to speak loudly for our lessons.

OR>>So, I will try to speak loudly in our next lessons.

I agree.

>>CORRECT

It\'s very easy, not difficult.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It\'s very easy, it\'s not difficult.

How to work a washing machine is easy too.

>>How to use a washing machine is easy too.

Just push the button.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Just push some buttons.

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