Do you agree that money can ruin a relationship?

2021-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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I agree with that. I have never experienced that so far, but I heard that from people who have experienced ruining their relationship through money. I just don\'t want to break my relationship with people who are friends and family through money. So I will refuse suggestions for lending money to people. However, if that happens to me, I\'ll pray for the best decision and will think a lot about people who suggested that I lend a lot of money. And when I lend money to people, I will think of the premise that I can\'t get it back. It depends on the situation. Also, It\'s hard for me to decide. Before I act on that, I will discuss it with my husband. Money makes breaking our relationship bring suffering to everyone. Thank you! Have a great weekend!

강사 첨삭

I really love your ideas and points, Jane! You always try to be fair as much as possible! Keep it up!-Faith-
I agree with that. 
>> I agree with that. 
I have never experienced that so far, but I heard that from people who have experienced ruining their relationship through money. 
>> CORRECT
OR I have never experienced that so far, but I heard some people\'s relationship was ruined because of money. 
I just don\'t want to break my relationship with people who are friends and family through money. 
>> I don\'t want to break my relationship with my friends and family because of money. 
So I will refuse suggestions for lending money to people. 
>> So, I will refuse the suggestions about lending money to people. 
However, if that happens to me, I\'ll pray for the best decision and will think a lot about people who suggested that I lend a lot of money. 
>> However, if that happens to me, I\'ll pray for the best decision and will think a lot about the people who suggested that I should lend them a lot of money.
And when I lend money to people, I will think of the premise that I can\'t get it back. 
>> CORRECT
It depends on the situation. 
>> But depends on the situation. 
Also, It\'s hard for me to decide. 
>> CORRECT
OR Also, it\'s not an easy decision to make.
Before I act on that, I will discuss it with my husband. 
>> Before I act on that, I will discuss it with my husband. 
Money makes breaking our relationship bring suffering to everyone.
>> Seeing that money is breaking a relationship brings suffering to everyone.
Thank you! Have a great weekend!
>> CORRECT

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