Do you agree that money makes the world round? Do you agree that the love of money is the root of al
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I don\'t want to belive it... but it\'s true...
People can\'t survive without money, and some are crazy for them.
If we don\'t have money, we will die.
And also if one person\'s all works point to one thing: MONEY, he will get greedy and greedy. And think money is never enough.
That would be a cruel world...
-The End-
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Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
QUESTION:
Do you agree that money makes the world round?
Do you agree that the love of money is the root of all evil?
I don\'t want to belive it... but it\'s true...
>>> I don\'t want to believe it, but it\'s true.
People can\'t survive without money, and some are crazy for them.
>>> People can\'t survive without money, and some are even crazy for it.
If we don\'t have money, we will die.
>>> CORRECT
And also if one person\'s all works point to one thing: MONEY, he will get greedy and greedy.
>>> If one person just works for money then one thing is for sure; he will hunger for more until he will be greedy.
And think money is never enough.
>>> He will always think that the money he has will never be enough.
That would be a cruel world.
>>> CORRECT
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