Do you agree that movies and television negatively influence the way people live and be have?
학생이 쓴 원문
Movies and television looks like our life.
Movies recast reality.
Movies reflectes present emotion, incident, etc.
So Many people agree movies story and television is showed drama, image, interview, etc.
For that reason sometimes Promble is occured.
Usually, Television is on air lurid crimes.
A few people blindly copy movies and television.
So I think around 50% television or movies has negatively influence.
Because If In a child has good education,
Movies and television influence can reduce.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I agree that there really is a negative effect.
That\'s why we need to guide children when they are watching.^_^
Anyway, see you later!
~T. Jessie~
Movies and television looks like our life.
>> Movies and television look like our life.
Movies recast reality.
>> Correct!
Movies reflectes present emotion, incident, etc.
>> Movies reflect present emotion, incident, etc.
So Many people agree movies story and television is showed drama, image, interview, etc.
>> Do you mean: So many people agree that the stories in movies and dramas are the same with their lives.
For that reason sometimes Promble is occured.
>> For that reason, sometimes, problems occur.
Usually, Television is on air lurid crimes.
>> Usually, the television airs lurid crimes.
A few people blindly copy movies and television.
>> Correct!
OR>> A few people blindly follow what they watch from the movies and televisions.
So I think around 50% television or movies has negatively influence.
>> So I think around 50% television shows or movies have negative influence.
Because If In a child has good education, Movies and television influence can reduce.
>> Because if a child has good education, the influence of movies and television will be reduced.
Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I agree that there really is a negative effect.
That\'s why we need to guide children when they are watching.^_^
Anyway, see you later!
~T. Jessie~
Movies and television looks like our life.
>> Movies and television look like our life.
Movies recast reality.
>> Correct!
Movies reflectes present emotion, incident, etc.
>> Movies reflect present emotion, incident, etc.
So Many people agree movies story and television is showed drama, image, interview, etc.
>> Do you mean: So many people agree that the stories in movies and dramas are the same with their lives.
For that reason sometimes Promble is occured.
>> For that reason, sometimes, problems occur.
Usually, Television is on air lurid crimes.
>> Usually, the television airs lurid crimes.
A few people blindly copy movies and television.
>> Correct!
OR>> A few people blindly follow what they watch from the movies and televisions.
So I think around 50% television or movies has negatively influence.
>> So I think around 50% television shows or movies have negative influence.
Because If In a child has good education, Movies and television influence can reduce.
>> Because if a child has good education, the influence of movies and television will be reduced.
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