Do you agree that pockets are useful? What can we put in them?
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow that is very interesting subject.
Pockets are very useful object.
We can put in many things.
For example, we usually put in wallet, mobile, coin and key.
But i hate that the pockets are inflated when i put in many things.
It looks not good.
So i normally used [이름]s.
It has better volume than pockets.
And it looks well.
Conclusionally pockets are very useful and when used the [이름] same time.
It\'s more useful save volume.
강사 첨삭
Hello Simon! Thank you for doing your homework! :)
~Teacher Sheila
Wow that is very interesting subject.
>>Wow! That is a very interesting subject.
Pockets are very useful object.
>>Pockets are very useful objects.
We can put in many things.
>>We can put many things.
For example, we usually put in wallet, mobile, coin and key.
>>For example, we usually put wallet, mobile, coin and key.
But i hate that the pockets are inflated when i put in many things.
>>But I hate that the pockets are inflated when I put many things inside it.
It looks not good.
>>It doesn\'t look good.
So i normally used [이름]s.
>>So I normally used [이름]s.
OR>>So I normally used [이름]s instead.
It has better volume than pockets.
>>It has a better space than pockets.
OR>>It is more spacious than pockets.
And it looks well.
>>CORRECT
Conclusionally pockets are very useful and when used the [이름] same time.
>>In conclusion, pockets are very useful together with our [이름]s at the same time.
It\'s more useful save volume.
>>It\'s more useful to save space.
>>Wow! That is a very interesting subject.
Pockets are very useful object.
>>Pockets are very useful objects.
We can put in many things.
>>We can put many things.
For example, we usually put in wallet, mobile, coin and key.
>>For example, we usually put wallet, mobile, coin and key.
But i hate that the pockets are inflated when i put in many things.
>>But I hate that the pockets are inflated when I put many things inside it.
It looks not good.
>>It doesn\'t look good.
So i normally used [이름]s.
>>So I normally used [이름]s.
OR>>So I normally used [이름]s instead.
It has better volume than pockets.
>>It has a better space than pockets.
OR>>It is more spacious than pockets.
And it looks well.
>>CORRECT
Conclusionally pockets are very useful and when used the [이름] same time.
>>In conclusion, pockets are very useful together with our [이름]s at the same time.
It\'s more useful save volume.
>>It\'s more useful to save space.
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