Do you agree that pockets are useful? What can we put in them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that pockets are useful. we usually get cell phone, wallet, cigarette and so on, when we go outside.
But we can\'t get these on hands continuously. On the other hand, women usually carry a handbag that they can get some items in.
men usually don\'t get a bag. So, we need pockets on clothes. In my case, I also consider the pockets when I buy clothes.
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>>CORRECT
we usually get cell phone, wallet, cigarette and so on, when we go outside.
>>We usually get cellphones, wallets, cigarettes and so on when we go outside.
But we can\'t get these on hands continuously.
>>But we can\'t carry these using our hands continuously.
On the other hand, women usually carry a handbag that they can get some items in.
>>CORRECT
OR>>On the other hand, women usually carry a handbag that they can put some items in.
men usually don\'t get a bag.
>>Me usually don\'t get a bag.
So, we need pockets on clothes.
>>CORRECT
In my case, I also consider the pockets when I buy clothes.
>>CORRECT
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