Do you agree that some sicknesses is hereditary and could be passed from one generation to another?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I agree.
Because there\'s lots of possibilities of getting a sickness from your older family because we have similar DNA.
And especially for sicknesses like cold, and sicknesses that are contagious. Because if families didn\'t pass away, they will someday contact with each other.
So it\'s true :)
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Do you agree that some sicknesses is hereditary and could be passed from one generation to another?
Yes, I agree.
Because there\'s lots of possibilities of getting a sickness from your older family because we have similar DNA.
Because there\'s lots of possibilities of getting a sickness from your older family because we have similar DNA.
>>> Yes, I agree because there\'s lots of possibilities of getting a sickness from your family member because we have similar DNAs.
And especially for sicknesses like cold, and sicknesses that are contagious.
>>> Moreover, sicknesses like cold and others are contagious but not hereditary.
Because if families didn\'t pass away, they will someday contact with each other. So it\'s true
>>> Because if your family members are not infected now, then they will someday be in contact with each other so infection is possible.
NOTE: [이름] hereditary is different from contagious. Cancer could be hereditary but colds are contagious.
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