Do you agree that tattoo is modern art?
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My opinion is that tattoo is modern art, because tattoo is a expression way of drawer\'s mind or clients. Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoo on website, The tattoos were drawn on a wound. The tattoo covered the wound, so the wound becomes base sketch of tattoo.I am sure that tattoo touched some\'s heart, and I am also touched. When I see the tattoo. There is no doubt that tattoo is modern art.
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Do you agree that tattoo is modern art?
My opinion is that tattoo is modern art, because tattoo is a expression way of drawer\'s mind or clients. >>> My opinion is a tattoo a modern art, yes because a tattoo is an expression of a drawer\'s mind or the clients.
Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoo on website, The tattoos were drawn on a wound.
>>> Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoos on the website like this tattoo which was drawn on a scar.
The tattoo covered the wound, so the wound becomes base sketch of tattoo.
>>> The tattoo actually covered the wound, so the wound becomes the base sketch of the tattoo.
I am sure that tattoo touched some\'s heart, and I am also touched. When I see the tattoo.
>>> I am sure that this tattoo touched someone\'s heart, and I am also touched when I see the tattoo.
There is no doubt that tattoo is modern art.
>>> CORRECT
* I agree, the tattoo made the scar so artistic and nothing to be ashamed off. ^^
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