Do you agree that you don't have the same time as you do now?

2018-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I agree with that. Because the present exists only now. After that time, it becomes the past, and it cannot be returned. A lot of people are living with regret for their past. but, I think it's hard to live by doing my best right now. So, I'm going to spend time doing what I can do now and doing what I value. At present, what I can do for my life is health and what I valu e is my family. Therefore, I exercise and spend time with my family now.

강사 첨삭


Hi there Mr. [이름]!(\",)

That\'s right, we must do what we can at the present so that we won\'t have regrets in the future.(\",)

~T. Lynn

I agree with that. Because the present exists only now. After that time, it becomes the past, and it cannot be returned.
>> correct!
A lot of people are living with regret for their past. but, I think it\'s hard to live by doing my best right now.
>> correct!
So, I\'m going to spend time doing what I can do now and doing what I value.
>> correct!
At present, what I can do for my life is health and what I value is my family.
>> At present, what I can do for my life is to be healthy and value my family. 
Therefore, I exercise and spend time with my family now.

>> correct!

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