Do you agree with the legalization of abortion?
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I am quite agree with abortion even it is not legal. I have seen some of cases that people got a pregnant and it makes hard their life a lot include baby. One of my friend got a pregnant when she was a 17 years old. She had a huge dream and a charming person. But, after having baby, she had to take care of baby all the time and still lives quite hard. Despite she loves her baby a lot. Sometimes, I think that what if i have a baby accidentally. Unfortunately, I am not sure I am happy with that news. I am not ready to have baby certainly. There are so many people who got a pregnant without preparing. So, I am agree with abortion even illegally. Even if they aren\'t deal with law, they will have hard time.
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>> I agree with abortion even if it is not legal.
I have seen some of cases that people got a pregnant and it makes hard their life a lot include baby.
>> I have seen some cases where women got pregnant, and it was hard for them to live their life with the baby.
One of my friend got a pregnant when she was a 17 years old.
>> One of my friends got pregnant when she was 17 years old.
She had a huge dream and a charming person.
>> She once had a big dream and she is a charming person.
But, after having baby, she had to take care of baby all the time and still lives quite hard.
>> But, after having baby, she had to take care of her baby all the time and she is still living a hard life.
Despite she loves her baby a lot.
>> Despite everything, she loves her baby a lot.
Sometimes, I think that what if i have a baby accidentally.
>> Sometimes, I get to think that what if I accidentally have a baby.
Unfortunately, I am not sure I am happy with that news.
>> Unfortunately, I am not sure if I will be happy with that news.
I am not ready to have baby certainly.
>> I am not ready to have a baby certainly.
There are so many people who got a pregnant without preparing.
>> There are so many people who have babies by accident.
So, I am agree with abortion even illegally.
>> So, I agree with the abortion of baby even if it is illegal.
Even if they aren\'t deal with law, they will have hard time.
>> Even if they are not in the law, people who have babies by accident will have a hard time living their life.
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