Do you agree with this definition of genius? Why or why not?

2015-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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I do not agree with the definition of genius. This is mainly because I have seen many inborn geniuses. One of them, for example, Lionel Messi is the most excellent soccer player in the world. However, he is well-known for enjoying his leisure time. He is the good example of genius. Although a person should try hard to improve one's performance, it is irrefutable that there is the each one's inherent talent.

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Good morning again, Mr. [이름]!^^Thank you for doing your first homework. I am looking forward to checking the others next time!^^ If you have questions regarding it, just feel free to ask during our class. ~~Teacher Erine~~ I do not agree with the definition of genius. >>CorrectThis is mainly because I have seen many inborn geniuses. >> CorrectOne of them, for example, Lionel Messi is the most excellent soccer player in the world. >>One of them, for example, is Lionel Messi, the most excellent soccer player in the world.However, he is well-known for enjoying his leisure time. >> CorrectHe is the good example of genius. >> He is the best example of genius.Although a person should try hard to improve one\'s performance, it is irrefutable that there is the each one\'s inherent talent. >> Although a person should try hard to improve one\'s performance, it is irrefutable to know that it is each one\'s inherent talent.

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