: Do you agree with this; Having friends is good for your physical health, and the benefits appear t
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think that having friends is helpful for my physical health.
It\'s because I usually play badminton and jump rope with my friends.
It makes me like sports and challenge a different sports.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
Do you agree with this; Having friends is good for your physical health, and the benefits appear to start early in life, according to a new study? Explain.
Yes, I think that having friends is helpful for my physical health.
>>> CORRECT
It\'s because I usually play badminton and jump rope with my friends.
>>> CORRECT
It makes me like sports and challenge a different sports.
>>> It helps me to like sports and it also challenges me to try another sport.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.