Do you agree with this saying: "People are definitely a company’s greatest asset." Do you think this
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Yes! I strongly agree that \"People are definitely a company\'s greatest asset\".
It is because they are the front liners of the business/ company.
And I also agree with you. There are some companies who don\'t treat their employees valuably.
But still, employees are working for them because they need their job.
Do you know someone who is in this kind of situation?
Tell me about it in class.
Teacher Nina
It is true that employees are a company’s great asset.
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>> It is true that the employees are a company\'s great asset.
It doesn’t matter how brilliant CEO or leaders you have in your company.
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>> It doesn\'t matter how brilliant the CEO or leaders you have in your company.
It is your employees that actually work to make things happen such as designing, manufacturing, and selling products, which eventually bring cash in to your pocket.
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>> It is your staff members that actually work to make things happen such as designing, manufacturing, and selling products, which eventually generates income in the office.
A company is like a sophisticated machine.
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You cannot do everything by yourself even if you are so capable.
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All of the components of the machine should be well connected, tuned up and work together to produce an output.
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That’s why all the companies have been developing and offering various programs to motivate and retain their employees.
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However, in reality, not all of the employees are treated valuably by their employers.
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Ironically, most companies try to let some of their employees leave the company early.
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Companies which primary goal is to make a profit have the performance and behavior evaluation program and screen out those under-performers to improve productivity.
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>> Better: Companies which primary goal is to make a profit have the performance, behavior evaluation program and screen out those under-performers to improve productivity.
This is capitalism.
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