Do you also eat different food depending on the season or weather? What about if you\'re sad, angry
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Yes. According to the season,I change food.
These day the weather is cold .So I eat warm soup.
If the weather is hot.I eat cool food.
And I sometimes let off steam for eating spicy food.
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Hello JO!
After reading your homework, I really would like to eat something warm now. Haha!
Here are your corrections.
Yes. According to the season,I change food.
>> Yes. According to the season, I change food preferences.
These days the weather is cold.
>> These days, the weather is cold.
So I eat warm soup.
>> So, I eat warm soup.
If the weather is hot.I eat cool food.
>> If the weather is hot, I eat cold foods.
And I sometimes let off steam for eating spicy food.
>> Correct!
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