Do you always choose to purchase products that are environmental friendly?
학생이 쓴 원문
I`m ashamed that I`m not considering the raw material of products. I have frequently compared the price in a mall except some items like a suncream and lotion. Rather than protecting the environment, The aim was for me. In a article, I could know some contries are co[이름]g into effect some laws to get rid of caused pollutions from the cosmetics which not permit public to use, buy, sell it in some place.
Eventhough It makes public spend more money, we have to consider looking on the bright side for the future.
The more we use some item including chemicals, The more quickly we can lost prestine area.
For the better condition, I will do my best to use environmental friendly items.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. We should all do our part in protecting the world we live in.
- T. Beth
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I`m ashamed that I`m not considering the raw material of products. >>> I`m ashamed that I`m not considering the ingredients used in products.
I have frequently compared the price in a mall except some items like a suncream and lotion.
>>> I have frequently compared the price in a mall except for some items like sunscreen and lotion.
Rather than protecting the environment, The aim was for me.
>>> Rather than protecting the environment, the aim was for me.
In a article, I could know some contries are co[이름]g into effect some laws to get rid of caused pollutions from the cosmetics which not permit public to use, buy, sell it in some place.
>>> In an article, I came to know that some countries came up with laws to get rid of pollutants from cosmetics and banning them for public use and consumption.
>>> In an article, I came to know that some countries came up with laws to get rid of pollutants from cosmetics and banning them for public use and consumption.
Eventhough It makes public spend more money, we have to consider looking on the bright side for the future.
>>> Even though the public spends more money, we have to consider looking on the bright side for the future.
>>> Even though the public spends more money, we have to consider looking on the bright side for the future.
The more we use some item including chemicals, The more quickly we can lost prestine area.
>>> The more we use products with dangerous chemicals, the quicker we lose nature.
>>> The more we use products with dangerous chemicals, the quicker we lose nature.
For the better condition, I will do my best to use environmental friendly items.
>>> OR: For a better condition, I will do my best to use environmental friendly items.
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