Do you always do what you have to?

2018-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

If I have a task that I have to do, I usually finish it on time even though sometimes, some of them are delayed. Because I can't leave it unfinished. I tried to completing my task on time when I was at the office as as much as I can. Of course, I always can't finish my tasks on time due to various reasons such as the shortage of time and inevitable circumstances including personal matters etc.. On the other hand, If I have to do several things at the same time in my personal life, I put the number of priority on them from the most urgent thing. And I do those things one by one.

강사 첨삭

Hi Dr. [이름]!

Thank you for your ideas that you have shared today.

Please keep up the good work! You are doing well!

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

ESSAY QUESTION: Do you always do what you have to?

If I have a task that I have to do, I usually finish it on time even though sometimes, some of them are delayed.

>>If I have a task that I need to do, I usually finish it on time, even though sometimes, it is delayed.

or>>If I have tasks that I must do, I usually finish them on time, even though sometimes, some are delayed.

Because, I can\'t leave it unfinished.

CORRECT!

or>>Since I can\'t leave the task behind without finishing it.

I tried to completing my task on time when I was at the office as as much as I can.

>>I tried to complete my task on time when I was at the office. I also did as much as I can.

or>>I tried completing as many tasks as I can and on time, when I used to work at the office.

Of course, I always can\'t finish my tasks on time due to various reasons such as the shortage of time and inevitable circumstances including personal matters, etc.

CORRECT!

or>>At times, I don’t always finish my tasks on time due to varying situations such as the lack of time or unavoidable events that may include some personal business, etc.

On the other hand, If I have to do several things at the same time in my personal life, I put the number of priority on them from the most urgent thing.

>>On the other hand, if I have to do several things at the same time in my personal life, I prioritize them from the most urgent matter.  

And I do those things one by one. 

CORRECT!

or>>I then start working on them one at a time. 

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