Do you always follow the same pattern to relieve stress or do you try different things?
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Good morning [이름]!
Thanks for our class today.
Well, relieving stress is necessary to get rid of those negative emotions that we have.
But I think that it is better for you to just jog around the park since it is good for your health than playing with your smartphone since it will just make your eyes grow tired all the time.
Anyway, just a suggestion.
Have a nice day ahead and see you again tomorrow. You take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I sometimes follow the same pattern to relive stress and sometimes I try different things.
>> I sometimes follow the same pattern to relieve stress and I sometimes try different things.
The same pattern to relive stress is play with smartphone.
>> The same pattern that I do to relieve stress is to paly with my smartphone.
I usually do kakaotalk with my friends or play some smartphone games or listen to favorite songs to relive stress.
>> correct! (relieve)
But I sometimes try different things like jogging in the park.
>> correct!
When I have time to take a rest, I go to the park and run around the park.
>> correct!
I think it relieves my stress and some nervous things.
>> correct!
>> or: I think it relieves my stress and get rid of things which makes me feel nervous.
I think jogging is the best choice, but actually I don\'t have much time to rest.
>> correct!
So, I follow the same pattern(playing with my smartphone) to relive stress.
>> correct! (relieve)
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