Do you always follow the same pattern to relieve stress or do you try different things?

2015-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I tend to follow the same pattern to relieve stress. There are many ways that people use to get rid of stress. However, most of them rely on their own ways rather than trying a different method, which is quite natural to every body because people are not willing to try a different thing. I used to do exercise when I get stressed out and I’m still doing it. However, it is really difficult for me to relieve stress when an issue is very serious. All of the trials do not help and it keeps bothering me. Even when I exercise, I cannot forget about it and keep thinking about it. The best way to relive stress is not to get stressed out at the first place. However, our life doesn’t go as we wish and we face many problems. People’s personalities play an important role in coping with stress. Some people like me are vulnerable to stress and get easily hurt. I have suffered a lot from even trivial things. The best cure is time. Just leave it there and let bygones be bygones.

강사 첨삭

Good day, SIr [이름] ^^!

How was your weekend?

I hope you had a wonderful time with your family.

Yes, you are right.
Each person deal with stress in a different way.

Some people go shopping, eat sweet foods, surf the internet, drink alcohol and so on.

I hope that you will have a stress free week ahead of you.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


I tend to follow the same pattern to relieve stress.

>> correct

There are many ways that people use to get rid of stress.

>> correct

>> OR: There are various ways that people do to get rid of stress.

However, most of them rely on their own ways rather than trying a different method, which is quite natural to every body because people are not willing to try a different thing.

>> correct

I used to do exercise when I get stressed out and I’m still doing it.

>> correct

>> OR: I exercise when I feel stressed/

However, it is really difficult for me to relieve stress when an issue is very serious.

>> correct

All of the trials do not help and it keeps bothering me.

>> correct

Even when I exercise, I cannot forget about it and keep thinking about it.

>> correct

The best way to relive stress is not to get stressed out at the first place.

>> correct  ( spelling check: relieve ^^ )

However, our life doesn’t go as we wish and we face many problems.

>> correct

People’s personalities play an important role in coping with stress.

>> correct

Some people like me are vulnerable to stress and get easily hurt.

>> Better: Some people like me are vulnerable to stress and easily get hurt.

I have suffered a lot from even trivial things.

>> correct

The best cure is time.

>> correct

Just leave it there and let bygones be bygones.

>> correct

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