Do you always follow the same pattern to relieve stress or do you try different things?
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Good day, SIr [이름] ^^!
How was your weekend?
I hope you had a wonderful time with your family.
Yes, you are right.
Each person deal with stress in a different way.
Some people go shopping, eat sweet foods, surf the internet, drink alcohol and so on.
I hope that you will have a stress free week ahead of you.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I tend to follow the same pattern to relieve stress.
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There are many ways that people use to get rid of stress.
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>> OR: There are various ways that people do to get rid of stress.
However, most of them rely on their own ways rather than trying a different method, which is quite natural to every body because people are not willing to try a different thing.
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I used to do exercise when I get stressed out and I’m still doing it.
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>> OR: I exercise when I feel stressed/
However, it is really difficult for me to relieve stress when an issue is very serious.
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All of the trials do not help and it keeps bothering me.
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Even when I exercise, I cannot forget about it and keep thinking about it.
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The best way to relive stress is not to get stressed out at the first place.
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However, our life doesn’t go as we wish and we face many problems.
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People’s personalities play an important role in coping with stress.
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Some people like me are vulnerable to stress and get easily hurt.
>> Better: Some people like me are vulnerable to stress and easily get hurt.
I have suffered a lot from even trivial things.
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The best cure is time.
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Just leave it there and let bygones be bygones.
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