Do you always follow the same pattern to relieve stress or do you try different things?
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as i mentioned i usually eat sweetie and spicy food.
one of the other method is watching you tube.
exactly saying, i try to think another one. i mean i try to focus on something different from my concern.
the bad thing is try to not think about worries.
but that way is wrong. we try to not think about our concern. we keep thinking and thinking about that.
so i usually turn to other topic in my brain and mind.
So i watch you tube or other things like something to make me out of mind.
i am thinking now the common thing between eating and watching is turn my mind\'s something eles.
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Hi [이름],
This is a good response to the homework you were given. I am glad that you are trying to apply correct grammar rules and you are putting more effort in creating longer sentences. Keep it up!
-Rachel
as i mentioned i usually eat sweetie and spicy food.
>> As I mentioned before, I usually eat sweet and spicy foods. (We use sweetie when we are talking with someone very close to us, like your girlfriend, a younger cousin or a friend)
one of the other method is watching you tube.
one of the other method is watching you tube.
>> correct
>> The other method is watching You Tube.
exactly saying, i try to think another one. i mean i try to focus on something different from my concern.
exactly saying, i try to think another one. i mean i try to focus on something different from my concern.
>> What I am exactly saying is that I try to think of another way. I try to focus on something other than my worries.
the bad thing is try to not think about worries.
the bad thing is try to not think about worries.
>> It is bad though to totally forget about my problems.
but that way is wrong. we try to not think about our concern. we keep thinking and thinking about that.
so i usually turn to other topic in my brain and mind.
but that way is wrong. we try to not think about our concern. we keep thinking and thinking about that.
so i usually turn to other topic in my brain and mind.
>> However, if we focus to much and think hard about our concerns, it is also not good, so we have to come up with other things to make our minds busy.
So i watch you tube or other things like something to make me out of mind.
So i watch you tube or other things like something to make me out of mind.
>> So I watch You Tube or other things to make me temporarily forget to stress. ( out of mind means crazy)
i am thinking now the common thing between eating and watching is turn my mind\'s something else.
i am thinking now the common thing between eating and watching is turn my mind\'s something else.
>> correct
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