Do you always follow the traffic rules?

2018-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

I can say that I have tried to follow the traffic rules, but if I am in a hurry, I usually break the traffic rules. It is possible to have a traffic accident if I hesitate cross the road when the light turn on from green to yellow and red. This can be out of rules that's why people make an emergency stop when yellow light on. I have paid huge amount of fine when I was living in UAE, because I thought there was no speed radar in the city. I realized that there was a camera in the middle of the road that doesn't look like Korea one after getting a fine bill from the traffic department in police station. I am the father who have two child and have to teach them right rules. I should set good example for my children so I will try to follow the traffic rules.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

I am happy that you are pretty determine to learn good things from your mistakes. That\'s the right values in life. Our children are our reflection, so we need to set a good example for them. Two thumbs up for that!

~Teacher Eunice


I can say that I have tried to follow the traffic rules, but if I am in a hurry, I usually break the traffic rules.

>>> Correct!

It is possible to have a traffic accident if I hesitate cross the road when the light turn on from green to yellow and red.

>>> It is possible to have a traffic accident if I hesitate to cross the road when the light turns on from green to yellow and red.

This can be out of rules that\'s why people make an emergency stop when yellow light on.

>>> This can be out of the rule that\'s why people make an emergency stop when the yellow light is on.  

I have paid huge amount of fine when I was living in UAE, because I thought there was no speed radar in the city.

>>> I have paid a huge amount of fine when I was living in the UAE, because I thought there was no speed radar in the city.  

I realized that there was a camera in the middle of the road that doesn\'t look like Korea one after getting a fine bill from the traffic department in police station.

>>> I realized that there was a camera in the middle of the road that doesn\'t look like the one in Korea, so after that I paid my fine at the traffic department in the police station. 

I am the father who have two child and have to teach them right rules.

>>> I am a father of two children and I have to teach them the right rules.

I should set good example for my children so I will try to follow the traffic rules.

>>> Correct! 


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