Do you always make specific plans on weekends?

2022-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes, I usually make specific plans on weekends depending on the seasons, fatigue degrees during weekdays. For example, I tend to go to other cities to enjoy cherry blossoms or go a picnic to Han Liver during spring on weekends. And If I work overtime a lot on weekdays, I focus on take a rest during weekend like getting a massage and going to peaceful cafe. I think staying at home on weekends is waste of time at least for me. This is because it’s the only time to be able to fully enjoy what I want.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Yes, I usually make specific plans on weekends depending on the seasons, fatigue degrees during weekdays.
>>Yes, I usually make specific plans on weekends depending on the seasons, fatigue decreases during weekdays.
For example, I tend to go to other cities to enjoy cherry blossoms or go a picnic to Han Liver during spring on weekends. 
>> For example, I tend to go to other cities to enjoy cherry blossoms or to go on a picnic at Han River during the Spring on weekends. 
And If I work overtime a lot on weekdays, I focus on take a rest during weekend like getting a massage and going to peaceful cafe.
>> And If I work overtime a lot on weekdays, I focus on taking a rest on weekends like getting a massage and going to a peaceful cafe.
I think staying at home on weekends is waste of time at least for me. 
>> I think staying at home on weekends is a waste of time at least for me. 
This is because it’s the only time to be able to fully enjoy what I want.
>> CORRECT!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·