Do you always recycle your old clothes or give them to charity?
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When I purchase my clothes, I choose a formal design .
So I usually wear them more than 10 years but if they are contemporary, I give them a charity.
I still have quite a few clothes and I don`t recycle them.
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When I purchase my clothes, I choose a formal design .
>> When I purchase clothes, I choose a formal design.
So I usually wear them more than 10 years but if they are contemporary, I give them a charity.
So I usually wear them more than 10 years but if they are contemporary, I give them a charity.
>> So I usually wear them for more than 10 years but if they have a contemporary design, I give them to charity.
I still have quite a few clothes and I don`t recycle them.
I still have quite a few clothes and I don`t recycle them.
>> Correct
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