Do you always share your plans with other people?

2020-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I don\'t always share plans with others. If I\'m going to have to share a plan, it\'s possible. It is difficult to understand when I have different thoughts from others. As people age, it is difficult to share opinions because they are stubborn and assertive. The easiest way to get there is to have different plans and work on them together. Finding the same thing with each other. That\'s the way to share. I\'m sleepy, so I can\'t study any more.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! It\'s never easy to share plans with other people. We can not easily predict the reaction of other people. Anyway, I hope you get enough rest to recharge your energy. See you in our next class. :) ~~T.Dee 

I don\'t always share plans with others.
>>CORRECT!
If I\'m going to have to share a plan, it\'s possible.
>>If I\'m going to have to share a plan, it\'s something that is possible (or realistic).
It is difficult to understand when I have different thoughts from others.
>>CORRECT!
As people age, it is difficult to share opinions because they are stubborn and assertive.
>>As people age, it is difficult to share opinions with them because they are stubborn and assertive.
The easiest way to get there is to have different plans and work on them together.
>>CORRECT!
Finding the same thing with each other.
>>They find the same things they share with each other.
That\'s the way to share. I\'m sleepy, so I can\'t study any more.
>>CORRECT!

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