: Do you always share your plans with other people? What kind of plans do people keep secret? Why do
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I get comforted when I share my concern with my friends or colleagues. In the same manner, I feel like share my plan or secret with someone who know me. However, I don\'t always talk my plan to other people. It depends on the issues, seriousness and whoever they are. I used to tell my plan to my friends for showing off. But I share my plan to get advice or find anything wrong these days. There can be something to hide, not to share with others if there is a possibility that someone ignore my ideas or if they are my competitors.
For me, I don\'t want to share my love story before I don\'t date with somebody because if my partner reject to my propose, I would feel embarrassed. Family planning can be the issue that might hide.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I get comforted when I share my concern with my friends or colleagues.
>>> CORRECT
In the same manner, I feel like share my plan or secret with someone who know me.
>>> In the same manner, I feel like sharing my plans or secrets with someone who knows me.
However, I don\'t always talk my plan to other people.
>>> However, I don\'t always tell my plans to other people.
It depends on the issues, seriousness and whoever they are.
>>> CORRECT
I used to tell my plan to my friends for showing off.
>>> I used to tell my plans to my friends to show off.
But I share my plans to get advice or find anything wrong these days.
>>> CORRECT
There can be something to hide, not to share with others if there is a possibility that someone might ignore my ideas or if they are my competitors.
>>> CORRECT
For me, I don\'t want to share my love story before I don\'t date with somebody because if my partner reject to my propose, I would feel embarrassed.
For me, I don\'t want to share my love story before I don\'t date with somebody because if my partner reject to my propose, I would feel embarrassed.
>>> For me, I don\'t want to share my love story before I don\'t date somebody because if my partner rejects my proposal, I would feel embarrassed.
Family planning can be the issue that might hide.
>>> Family planning can be an issue that could be hidden.
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