Do you always study the terms of employment carefully before you accept a job offer?
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I have had a experience which is checking employment. That is because i worked one time including a contract. That time, I didn\'t pay attaintion of it. However, I noticed that is something unfair and mistakes, while working. I already signed up the contract and read emplyment carelessly. From now, I should deal with employment more careful what the company give me and protect me, also money.
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Good morning [이름]! Yes, We must read and analyze our employment contract before we sign.
I have had a experience which is checking employment.
>>> I had an experience which is checking employment.
That is because i worked one time including a contract.
>>> That is because I worked one time, including a contract.
That time, I didn\'t pay attaintion of it.
>>> That time, I didn\'t pay attention on it.
However, I noticed that is something unfair and mistakes, while working.
>>> However, I noticed there\'s something wrong and it\'s unfair.
I already signed up the contract and read emplyment carelessly.
>>> While working, I already signed up the contract and read employment carelessly.
From now, I should deal with employment more careful what the company give me and protect me, also money.
>>> From now on, I should read the employment contract carefully what are the things that I should do and not to do most what are my benefits.
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