Do you always want to be in almost all parties? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want to be in almost all parties. If I\'m early 20s, I can attend all of the parties. But, I\'m late 20s now, I can\'t do it, Because I don\'t have a enough strength to do that.
강사 첨삭
Wow! I didn\'t expect this, [이름]! You\'re not yet old so I think you still have enough strength to do that! But I know it\'s your preference. Still, I know you enjoy spending your time with your family and friends so that\'s what matters most!-Faith-
I don\'t want to be in almost all parties. >> CORRECT
If I\'m early 20s, I can attend all of the parties.
>> If I were in my early 20s, I could attend all of the parties.
But, I\'m late 20s now, I can\'t do it, Because I don\'t have a enough strength to do that.
>> But, I\'m in my late 20s now, so I can\'t do it because I don\'t have enough strength to do that.
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