Do you always wear sunscreen when you go out to do your daily activities? Are cosmetic products you
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Doctors say \"you should wear sunscreen when you go outside.\"
but I don\'t care.The weather is cold.Maybe it\'s warm,
I wear sunscreen. While winter I have never weared sunscreen.
2. I have acne.so I can\'t use cosmetic products for environment. I just look for spot on cosmetic products.
Acne is stress me out.but i\'m trying to something.
Then what? I sometime try to use dispocable item.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jo!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic.
My country is tropical, so, it is always warm. I wear sunscreen but not often because I am lazy to apply it on. Haha!
By the way, I use Korean cosmetic products.
Anyway, here are the corrections.
Doctors say \"you should wear sunscreen when you go outside.\"
>> Doctors say, \"You should wear sunscreen when you go outside.\"
but I don\'t care.The weather is cold.
>> But, I don\'t care. The weather is cold.
Maybe it\'s warm, I wear sunscreen. While winter I have never weared sunscreen.
>> Maybe if it\'s warm, I will wear sunscreen. In winter, I have never wore sunscreen.
I have acne.so I can\'t use cosmetic products for environment. I just look for spot on cosmetic products.
>> I have acne so, I can\'t use cosmetic products that are good for the environment. I just look for good spots on cosmetic products.
Acne is stress me out.but i\'m trying to something.
>> Acne is stressing me out. But, I\'m trying to do something.
Then what? I sometime try to use dispocable item.
>> Then what? I sometime try to use disposable items.
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