Do you always weigh pros and cons before making a final decision?
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I always try to evaluate the pros and cons every time before making a final decision. However, I sometimes become too emotional and make a radical decision. Alongside this, I prioritize physical and metal difficultness first than any other shortcomings, so these features matter to me most when making the final decision. When I resigned from a previous job, I knew that it would be difficult to get a new permanent position due to the pandemic. But I quitted because there are many things that I had to give up while working. For example, the emotional struggle that I had to experience as part of the customer service team was severe. Due to the industry characteristics, many clients were strained and angry. They usually swore a lot and randomly called me stupid. I wanted to move to a back-office job where I could face clients less time.
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I always try to evaluate the pros and cons every time before making a final decision.
>>>> correct
However, I sometimes become too emotional and make a radical decision.
>>>> correct
Alongside this, I prioritize physical and metal difficultness first than any other shortcomings, so these features matter to me most when making the final decision.
>>>> OR: In addition, I prioritize physical and metal difficultness first than any other drawbacks, so these factors matter to me most when making the final decision.
When I resigned from a previous job, I knew that it would be difficult to get a new permanent position due to the pandemic.
>>>> correct
But I quitted because there are many things that I had to give up while working.
>>>> But I quit because there were many things that I had to give up while working.
For example, the emotional struggle that I had to experience as part of the customer service team was severe.
>>>> correct
Due to the industry characteristics, many clients were strained and angry.
>>>> Due to the industry\'s characteristics, many clients were strained and angry.
They usually swore a lot and randomly called me stupid.
>>>> correct
I wanted to move to a back-office job where I could face clients less time.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: I wanted to move to a back-office job where I don\'t have to directly deal with clients.
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