Do you believe age brings wisdom, or is wisdom independent of age?
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I think the age is wisdom independent of age because younger people is wisdom,older is sick.
So it is independent.
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Jean~~
Do you believe age brings wisdom, or is wisdom independent of age?
I think the age is wisdom independent of age because younger people is wisdom,older is sick.
>>> I think wisdom is independent of age because young people can be wise, and older people can be sick.
So it is independent.
>>> Therefore, wisdom does not depend on age.
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