Do you believe appreciation at work is more important than salary? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are people with various personality in working place.
Someone who is motivated by money, someone who is motivated by complements.
Money is basic motivation tool. but, this is not all. Money can lead to people easily but, this is only a monent.
People to get satisfaction in their continuous work, sometimes we need the fruit of complements.
Complements are good source in the salad.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
You expressed your ideas very well! I like how you recognized that money is important but not the only factor that keeps people motivated at work. Your comparison between money and compliments shows a good balance in your thinking. I especially enjoyed your creative metaphor about compliments being like fruit in a salad, it makes the answer unique and memorable. Keep developing your thoughts with clear examples, and you’ll be able to give even stronger and more convincing answers. Great effort!
-Teacher Wela
There are people with various personality in working place.
>> There are people with different personalities in the workplace.
Someone who is motivated by money, someone who is motivated by complements.
>> Some people are motivated by money, while others are motivated by compliments.
Money is basic motivation tool. but, this is not all.
>> Money is a basic motivation tool, but it’s not everything.
Money can lead to people easily but, this is only a monent.
Money can lead to people easily but, this is only a monent.
>>Money can attract people easily, but it only works for a short time.
People to get satisfaction in their continuous work, sometimes we need the fruit of complements.
>> For people to feel satisfied in their work continuously, they sometimes need the reward of compliments.
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