Do you believe dogs need strict training or gentle guidance?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe common dogs don\'t need to strict training.
However, they need to learn some gentles.
For example, they have to say hello properly without barking whenever meet their friends like other dogs or people.
If our dog is sensitive, they necessarily learn about the training from trainers.
Or, they can educate in the facilities called dog\'s kingdergarden.
Especially, Many Korean doesn\'t like one thing that is off leash, because there were some accidents about doggy bite someone in Korea.
If the owner allow let their dog off leash, they must pay a fine unlike another countries.
I can understand the rule and the opinion, because my son had ever felt to be scary dogs before.
I know he loves Neaty fully now.
강사 첨삭
I believe common dogs don\'t need to strict training.
>> I believe common dogs don’t need strict training.
However, they need to learn some gentles.
>> However, they need to learn some gentle behaviors.
For example, they have to say hello properly without barking whenever meet their friends like other dogs or people.
>> For example, they have to greet properly without barking whenever they meet their friends, such as other dogs or people.
>> For example, they have to greet properly without barking whenever they meet their friends, such as other dogs or people.
If our dog is sensitive, they necessarily learn about the training from trainers.
>> If our dog is sensitive, it should definitely learn training from professional trainers.
>> If our dog is sensitive, it should definitely learn training from professional trainers.
Or, they can educate in the facilities called dog\'s kingdergarden.
>> Alternatively, they can be trained at facilities called doggy kindergartens.
>> Alternatively, they can be trained at facilities called doggy kindergartens.
Especially, Many Korean doesn\'t like one thing that is off leash, because there were some accidents about doggy bite someone in Korea.
>> Especially, many Koreans don’t like letting dogs off leash because there have been some accidents where dogs bit someone in Korea.
>> Especially, many Koreans don’t like letting dogs off leash because there have been some accidents where dogs bit someone in Korea.
If the owner allow let their dog off leash, they must pay a fine unlike another countries.
>> If the owner allows their dog to be off leash, they must pay a fine, unlike in other countries.
>> If the owner allows their dog to be off leash, they must pay a fine, unlike in other countries.
I can understand the rule and the opinion, because my son had ever felt to be scary dogs before.
>> I can understand the rule and the reasoning because my son has been scared of dogs before.
>> I can understand the rule and the reasoning because my son has been scared of dogs before.
I know he loves Neaty fully now.
>> I know he fully loves Neaty now.
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