Do you believe fortune tellers? Have you ever gone to a fortune teller? Write about your experience.

2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I don't believe fortune tellers. In my opinion, they don't know our future. I think they are good observers. They could guess lifestyle of their costumers through observing. expressions and outfit could be some clues. They can tell that you are a person of scholar type to their costumer when they met a costumer who uses high class vocabulary. I have gone to fortune teller when I was a college student. In those days, fortune-telling spread throughout the country. When I went to fortune teller, it was for fun. I didn't believe they can predict. Actually, their prediction didn't come true.

강사 첨삭

Good morning!
Thanks for sharing your experience.
I totally agree that they are very good observers.
I am also curious and I also want to try it just for fun but I think it\'s a waste of money.. hahha.
See you soon Ms. [이름]!
~T. Jessie~
I don\'t believe fortune tellers.
>> Correct!
In my opinion, they don\'t know our future.

>> Correct!
I think they are good observers.

>> Correct!
They could guess lifestyle of their costumers through observing.

>> They could guess the lifestyle of their costumers through observing.
expressions and outfit could be some clues.

>> Expressions and outfit could be some clues.
They can tell that you are a person of scholar type to their costumer when they met a costumer who uses high class vocabulary.

>> They can tell their customer that she/he is a  scholar type person if she/he uses high class vocabulary.
I have gone to fortune teller when I was a college student.

>> I have gone to a fortune teller when I was a college student.
In those days, fortune-telling spread throughout the country.

>> Correct!
When I went to fortune teller, it was for fun.

>> When I went to a fortune teller, it was for fun.
I didn\'t believe they can predict.

>> Correct!
Actually, their prediction didn\'t come true.

>> Correct!

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