Do you believe god?

2010-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I don't knew about god. I thought that i was alone and the man must live alone in the world. First time when i went to the church, i went just to the church. And I didn't know about god. And I was alone all the time. Some day I had know that how he loves me until he killed his son for my crime during sunday worship. And now I believe the god and i can feeling he always be with me. I go to the church every sunday and I'm teacher in church school. My students are a second year in middle school. Nowaday I'm not alone because he allways loves me althouth people don't like me and I live alone. I'm happy and thankfull for everything. I hope you allways happy in god's love. God bless you.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Alang, I’m so delighted knowing that you are walking in the path that we are ought to take. In addition to this, I want to share this passage Isaiah 40:31 but those who hope in the LORD will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; they will run and not grow weary, they will walk and not be faint. God’s promises are meant for everyone-you’ll never walk alone. Keep the faith!! Take care, - Connie -   I don't knew about god. >> I didn’t know about God before.  I thought that i was alone and the man must live alone in the world. >> I thought that I was alone and that man must linve alone in the world. First time when i went to the church, i went just to the church. And I didn't know about god. >> The first time that I went to the church, I didn’t know about God. And I was alone all the time. >> I was alone all the time. Some day I had know that how he loves me until he killed his son for my crime during sunday worship. >> I had known how much He loved me that He sacrificed his son to suffer  for my sins during a Sunday worship. And now I believe the god and i can feeling he always be with me. >> and now I believe that God will always be with me. I go to the church every sunday and I'm teacher in church school. >> I go to church every Sunday and I’m a Sunday school teacher, too. My students are a second year in middle school. >> My students are second year in the middle school.Nowaday I'm not alone because he allways loves me althouth people don't like me and I live alone. >> Nowadays, I’m not alone because he He loves me although other people may not like me and I seem to be alone. I'm happy and thankful for everything. >> Correct  I hope you allways happy in God's love. >> Correct God bless you. >> Correct >> God bless you, too.

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