Do you believe group classes are more motivating than exercising alone?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that group classes are more motivating if group members are positive. If every group members are lazy and complain with high-level technique, although teacher is very energetic and wants to teach more, she can\'t teach harder things. And at that class, there is any growth. However, if the group members\' propertise are positive and try to growing up, in that class, I also tru to to more motivated them. And this is the reason that I like to do pole dancing. There\'re a lot of positive person and hard trainer, so I motivated a lot from them.
강사 첨삭
You gave a great explanation about how the attitude of group members can influence motivation in group classes. Your example from pole dancing made your answer more personal and engaging. It clearly shows how a positive environment can encourage people to improve. To improve your writing, focus on grammar accuracy and word choice, especially with plural forms (people, members) and natural expressions (motivated by them). Overall, your idea is clear and your personal example makes your response strong and interesting!
-Teacher Wela
I think that group classes are more motivating if group members are positive.
>> I think that group classes are more motivating if the group members are positive.
If every group members are lazy and complain with high-level technique, although teacher is very energetic and wants to teach more, she can\'t teach harder things.
>> If all the group members are lazy and complain about high-level techniques, even if the teacher is very energetic and wants to teach more, she cannot teach more challenging skills.
And at that class, there is any growth.
>> In that case, there is no growth in the class.
However, if the group members\' propertise are positive and try to growing up, in that class, I also tru to to more motivated them.
>> However, if the group members have positive attitudes and try to improve, I also feel more motivated by them.
And this is the reason that I like to do pole dancing.
>> This is one of the reasons why I like doing pole dancing.
There\'re a lot of positive person and hard trainer, so I motivated a lot from them.
>> There are many positive people and hardworking trainers, so I get a lot of motivation from them.
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