Do you believe in aliens?
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I totally believe in aliens that is because I watched a video about Air Force Expose that USA government know that aliens have been existing and real but they have been hiding. I heard that US A government killed a person who knows about aliens. Secondly, the universe is enormous. If we fly in the universe in the light speed we need to fly for 46.5 billion light years. I believe that there are always other planets like an earth so it doesn’t make sense that there aren’t any aliens in the whole universe. I think our earth have appeared so early so it is hard for us to find more advanced civilization easily.
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T. DON
I totally believe in aliens that is because I watched a video about Air
Force Expose that USA government know that aliens have been existing
and real but they have been hiding. I heard that US A government killed a
person who knows about aliens. Secondly, the universe is enormous. If
we fly in the universe in the light speed we need to fly for 46.5
billion light years. I believe that there are always other planets like
an earth so it doesn’t make sense that there aren’t any aliens in the
whole universe. I think our earth have appeared so early so it is hard
for us to find more advanced civilization easily.
>> I totally believe in aliens that is because I watched a video about Air
Force Expose that USA government know that aliens have been existing
and real but they have been hiding this fact. I heard that the US government killed a
person who knows about aliens. Secondly, the universe is enormous. If
we fly in the universe with a light speed we need to fly for 46.5
billion light years. I believe that there are always other planets like earth so it doesn’t make sense that there aren’t any aliens in the
whole universe. I think our earth have appeared so early so it is hard
for us to find more advanced civilization easily.
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