Do you believe in aliens? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I do because universe is huge. So I think that other creatures exist in this universe. Also, there is a news which saw aliens. I think it is real. And I heard that there is a planet which is similar to the Earth. So, I believe other creatures\' existence. In fact, I didn\'t believe any creature\'s existence before I see the news. I believe existence of aliens now, but I don\'t want to meet them in person because they are not humans and I don\'t know their language. So, if I meet them in person, I will run away.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly!
Me too! I have always been fascinated with space. There are so many things that we haven\'t discovered yet.
Yes, I do because universe is huge.
>> Yes, I do because the universe is huge.
>> Yes, I do because the universe is huge.
So I think that other creatures exist in this universe.
>> I think that there are other creatures existing in the universe.
Also, there is a news which saw aliens. I think it is real.
>> Also, there is a news about seeing aliens. I think it is real.
And I heard that there is a planet which is similar to the Earth.
>> And I heard that there is a planet which is similar to Earth.
So, I believe other creatures\' existence.
>> So, I believe that other creatures exist.
In fact, I didn\'t believe any creature\'s existence before I see the news.
>>> In fact, I didn\'t believe in it before I saw the news.
I believe existence of aliens now, but I don\'t want to meet them in person because they are not humans and I don\'t know their language.
>> I believe in their existence now but I don\'t want to meet them in person because they are not humans and I don\'t know how to communicate with them.
So, if I meet them in person, I will run away.
>> CORRECT
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