Do you believe in any superstitions, even if you know they might not be rational?

2023-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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I don\'t believe in all superstitions, but I do believe in some superstitions that I know may not be rational. For example, it is a myth that you don\'t eat seaweed soup on days when you have an important test. Seaweed is slippery, so it ruins the important test or fails. There are many unpredictable factors in the important test, but the biggest factor is psychological factor. I think psychological factor affects in the important test. It\'s really ridiculous superstition, but people have a desire to rely on it sometimes. So, reducing psychological anxiety may lead to better results.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Thanks for this. Merry Christmas to you and your family! ^_^
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Do you believe in any superstitions, even if you know they might not be rational?
I don\'t believe in all superstitions, but I do believe in some superstitions that I know may not be rational.
>> Correct
For example, it is a myth that you don\'t eat seaweed soup on days when you have an important test.
>> Correct
Seaweed is slippery, so it ruins the important test or fails.
>> Correct
>> OR: Seaweed is slippery, so it may affect the important test negatively.
There are many unpredictable factors in the important test, but the biggest factor is psychological factor.
>> Correct
>> OR: There are many unpredictable factors in the important test, but the most significant one is psychological.
I think psychological factor affects in the important test.
>> I think the psychological factor affects the important test.
It\'s really ridiculous superstition, but people have a desire to rely on it sometimes.
>> It\'s a really ridiculous superstition, but people sometimes have a desire to rely on it.
So, reducing psychological anxiety may lead to better results.
>> Correct

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