Do you believe in ghosts?

2025-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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I believe in ghosts. Because I felt that the ghost came to me when I was sleeping. My consciousness is awaking but I couldn\'t move my body except eyes. However, I didn\'t open my eyes because someone (maybe a ghost) was in side from me. It was so scary. I think that I had a nightmare. I don\'t want to experience this again.

강사 첨삭

Hi Nicole!

I think you might have what they call sleep paralysis.

I had this experience multiple times already.

The experience was really traumatic.

Andrea

I believe in ghosts. Because I felt that the ghost came to me when I was sleeping.

>> I believe in ghosts because I felt it came to me when I was sleeping.

My consciousness is awaking but I couldn\'t move my body except eyes.
>> My consciousness is awake, but I couldn\'t move my body except for my eyes.

However, I didn\'t open my eyes because someone (maybe a ghost) was in side from me.
>> However, I didn\'t open my eyes because someone (maybe a ghost) was beside me.

It was so scary.

>> Correct

I think that I had a nightmare.

>> I think I had a nightmare.

I don\'t want to experience this again.

>> Correct

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