Do you believe in God? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
As a result, I believe in God.
People made religions because they thought that someone may made this world.
But it is just one of the fixed minds because people\'s logics are limited.
They can\'t explain the creation of the world without the mind.
So they thought that somebody may made this world.
Before, I didn\'t knew about this fact so I just believed in God.
But I thought about my religion, and it caused the curiosity about my religion.
So sometimes, I doubted about my religion.
But now, I recognized that believing is more important than knowing the fact.
All what I have to do is just believe, and if I am having a hard time, depend on my trust.
강사 첨삭
Hi Evan:)
Yes, that\'s true. We just need to have faith and believe.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
-Teacher EliseAs a result, I believe in God.
>> I believe in God.
People made religions because they thought that someone may made this world.
>> People made religions because they thought that someone made this world.
But it is just one of the fixed minds because people\'s logics are limited.
>> But it\'s just the product of logics of people\'s minds.
They can\'t explain the creation of the world without the mind.
>> They don\'t know the explanation whether how the world was created.
So they thought that somebody may made this world.
>> So they thought that somebody may have made this world.
Before, I didn\'t knew about this fact so I just believed in God.
>> CORRECT
But I thought about my religion, and it caused the curiosity about my religion.
> But I was thinking about my religion, and made me curious.
So sometimes, I doubted about my religion.
>> CORRECT
But now, I recognized that believing is more important than knowing the fact.
>> CORRECT
All what I have to do is just believe, and if I am having a hard time, depend on my trust.
>> All I have to do it just believe even if I have a hard time.
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