Do you believe in life after death? Why or Why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe it. because before my dad died, he was like someone comes here to bring me. I didn\'t watch it. my mom said the story to me. and I hope there is life after death. because I want my dad to be comfortable in there. If the people who have religion only go to good place, I can\'t go there. but my dad had religion so he probably go to good place.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Life after death is called \"Heaven\". Some people believe in it and some don\'t. It actually depends on your faith. Our perspectives are different from another. Thanks for sharing yours :)
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I believe it. because before my dad died, he was like someone comes here to bring me.
>> I believe in it because before my dad died, he said that something was coming near him to get him.
I didn\'t watch it. my mom said the story to me. and I hope there is life after death.
>> I didn\'t see it personally but my mom told me this story. I hope that there\'s life after death because I want my dad to be comfortable there.
because I want my dad to be comfortable in there.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
If the people who have religion only go to good place, I can\'t go there.
>> If people who don\'t have religion won\'t be able to go there, then I won\'t be able to do so as well.
but my dad had religion so he probably go to good place.
>> Although, my dad has a religion so he would probably go there.
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