Do you believe in life after death? Why or Why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you believe in life after death? Why or Why not?
I believe in life after death to a certain extent.
There seems to be a heaven and hell.
No one has not proved them.
I think that It\'s certainly is existed an afterlife in any way.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Life after death is called \"Heaven\". Some people believe in it and some don\'t. It actually depends on your faith. Our perspectives are different from another. Thanks for sharing yours :)
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I believe in life after death to a certain extent.
There seems to be a heaven and hell.
No one has not proved them.
I think that It\'s certainly is existed an afterlife in any way.
>>CORRECT
There seems to be a heaven and hell.
>> CORRRECT
No one has not proved them.
>> No one has proved them.
I think that It\'s certainly is existed an afterlife in any way.
>> I think that that after life certainly exists.
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