Do you believe in life on other planets?
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I don\'t think there is life on other planets. Mars is well known planet for us. As I know, some astronauts have ever been many planets and they found out no people in each planet. We have seen few news about UFO that might be alien boarded. However, even though some people insist that they took a photo of UFO, I don\'t believe there are aliens on the planets. Many countries have sent astronauts to various planets until now. But I haven\'t heard any alive aliens in the place astronauts visited. The thing human need to find out on the planets is that if planet is safe place people can live because many professionals predict that the humans will not be able to live hear. The main reason why environment expects predict the earth will be destroyed is because of environmental pollution. I think it\'s already late to try to prevent our lovely earth but we still have time to keep it for our children and descendants.
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You have quite interesting ideas. I hope to talk to you tomorrow. See you! ^_^
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I don\'t think there is life on other planets.
>> CORRECT
Mars is well known planet for us.
>> Mars is a well-known planet to us.
OR>> Mars is well-known among humans.
As I know, some astronauts have ever been many planets and they found out no people in each planet.
>> As I far as I know, some astronauts have been to many planets and they found no people in each planet.
We have seen few news about UFO that might be alien boarded.
>> We have seen a few news about UFO\'s which might have aliens on board.
However, even though some people insist that they took a photo of UFO, I don\'t believe there are aliens on the planets.
>> CORRECT
Many countries have sent astronauts to various planets until now. But I haven\'t heard any alive aliens in the place astronauts visited.
>> CORRECT
The thing human need to find out on the planets is that if planet is safe place people can live because many professionals predict that the humans will not be able to live hear.
>> The thing humans need to find out about the planets should be whether the planet is a safe place people can live in because many professionals predict that the humans will not be able to live here.
The main reason why environment expects predict the earth will be destroyed is because of environmental pollution.
>> CORRECT
I think it\'s already late to try to prevent our lovely earth but we still have time to keep it for our children and descendants.
>> I think it\'s already late to try to prevent our lovely earth from destruction, but we still have time to keep it for our children and descendants.
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