Do you believe in lifelong learning? Why or why not?
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These days, medical technology has developed, so we can live until 100 years old.
So, it\'s important to learn for whole life.
We have to learn a new skills and subjects continuously.
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These days, medical technology has developed, so we can live until 100 years old.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> These days, medical technology has developed a lot that may allow a person to live for 100 years.
So, it\'s important to learn for whole life.
>> I believe that during our years here on Earth, we always need to learn.
We have to learn a new skills and subjects continuously.
>> We have to learn new skills and subjects continuously.
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