Do you believe in love at first sight? Why?
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Personally, I don\'t believe in love at first sight because we tend to look at the appearance for the first time.
I think love is such a broad term. Definitely, someone says that love at first sight exisit but it may just attraction.
The reason is that people look straight to the positives and realiz the negatives later on .
Therefore it really isn\'t love at first sight.
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Do you believe in love at first sight? Why?
Personally, I don\'t believe in love at first sight because we tend to look at the appearance for the first time.
>> Personally, I don\'t believe in love at first sight because we tend to look at the appearance when we meet someone for the first time.
I think love is such a broad term.
>> OR: As far as I\'m concerned, love is a word that is not easy to define or put a label on because it encompasses many aspects.
Definitely, someone says that love at first sight exisit but it may just attraction.
>> I\'m fairly certain that if someone says love at first does exist, it may just only be an attraction or even lust at first sight.
The reason is that people look straight to the positives and realiz the negatives later on.
>> The reason is that people\'s attention is generally drawn toward the positive points and realize the negatives later on.
Therefore it really isn\'t love at first sight.
>> OR: Hence, I\'d have to argue that it really isn\'t love at first sight at all.
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